It looks like the story from here on out has some pretty drastic changes. I hope you have no real attachment to the old story. I’m sure AJ can still use some of the story scenes remaining, but the story of Alex and me has changed drastically.

I don’t want to spoil things. But this is the way it flowed in the rewrite and I think I’m more satisfied that before.

Maybe no cliffhanger at the end of the story — well see.

2 thoughts on “Revisions

  1. Oooo! Color me deeply intrigued. 🙂

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    1. Maybe when it’s done you can beta read (if you are interested)

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