Solace

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Adrift?  Really?  You couldn’t space these out even a little?

 I’m adrift on this writing prompt… Haiku maybe?

I’m floating adrift
Upon the rough high waters
Seeking my solace

AJ was venting to Rae and mentioned I was trying a haiku and as AJ’s typing a minute later wham! Haiku shows up:

Adrift, I float on
Lost from view above the clouds
There is peace up here

See AJ sucks at haikus. AJ’s best friend makes it look easy. So many of you creative people out there.

8 Comments

  1. SauceBox says:

    Love it! Great stuff! You’ve got my follow. Check out my comedy blog and give it a follow if you like it!

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    1. Nox says:

      Thanks for taking the time to comment.

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      1. SauceBox says:

        No problem!

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  2. Nel says:

    I agree Nox. They could have spaced out the synonyms at least by a week! Nice haikus though! I think AJ did a good job.

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    1. Nox says:

      I’d say that’s all me… but that’s really a lie since I’m not exactly real and all sighs fine props to AJ!

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      1. Haha! You’ll give props to AJ this time, huh? That seems fair. ;)

        Personally, I think both haikus were awesome.

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      2. Nox says:

        Thanks. Yes this time.

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